BUSINESS COMMUNICATION PORTFOLIO 2
Business Communication Portfolio
Task 1: Email to Company Team
To: All company workers
Cc:
Subject: Motivation and encouragement among company staff
We are all aware that we recently conducted a survey seeking to find out the experience of
our customers from their use of the new weight loss optimizer product. We got the results and thus
it is important to make note of the following issues. I want to thank each of you for the various
responsibilities in doing the survey. These are the study outcomes.
Weight lose optimizer advantages
From the study that has already been carried out on the product, with 100 people as participants,
90% confirmed to lose over 15 pounds after some reasonable time as they used the product. 80%
of them reduced in weight as they continued using the weight loss optimizer. This means that we
have the capacity to manufacture and keep up with increased demand for the product as
supplement. We also have grown in experience from the sale and marketing of products that
reduce weight. We still enjoy a significant customer base that is already using the current weight
lose product.
Disadvantages of the product
From the study, 10% of respondents failed to see same results as they used the weight lose
optimizer product as the others. Thus we have a challenge in convincing them that the product is
worth their use. These disadvantages can be mitigated through having the technical team in our
company to come up with a tracking device for the customers that will be used together with the
weight lose optimizer product. The tracking device will make the customers to be tracking their
start weight, intake calories and physical activities they do. However, it is important to note tow
issues from the research; from the study it is not known if the respondents made use of the product
in the correct manner by following the given guidelines. It is also not easy to know whether, the
10% victims may not have lost more than 15 pounds as the others but lost at least some amount of
weight as they used the weight loss optimizer.
Besides this development in the company I thank you for your continued support you have
shown for the last decade towards the growth of the company. I would like to urge you to be
patient with the success of the company bearing in mind that the company needs this form of effort
and spirit to achieve the success we have always dreamt of. From the new partnership plan, and
increase sales from the sale of the new product, I assure you that, it is not long before we make a
significant growth in the company. I assure you that you will be the first beneficiaries if the success
I see is achieved. I cannot forget to remind you that the best performers will be rewarded during
our annual assessment of company development. Let us work together to make the new product do
well in the market.
Company manager,
Christopher McCkain,
Techno Inc.
11
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street, Wilbeck Avenue.