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workers in Britain revolt against technology, more examples related to the spread of AI in
different industries to replace human labour would have been necessary. This will help in
elaborating more on the topic and make it more understandable. In the article, examples are not
used as much as they should to elaborate more on a particular argument. Examples help the
readers of the article to get a clear understanding of the argument. Additionally, they help the
readers to relate to the subject of discussions.
Throughout the paper, no citations and references were used. References are important as
they give proof of the arguments in the article. As Ken Hyland argues, the use of appropriate
textual practices such as the use of citations in an essay or research is important to the acceptance
of claims (Hyland 22). They also help to acknowledge the contribution of other writers. For
example, in the article, I should have put different citations with reference to the writer, Kentaro
Tayoma.
Generally, I think the article was well written, and the topic was well discussed. The
manner in which I put across my points and elaborated on them was exceptional, even though
there is always some room for improvement. The way I discussed different arguments in each
paragraph in support of the main topic of discussion was good, and the article had a good flow of
thoughts from the beginning to the end which gives readers an easy time while reading and
trying to understand the arguments discussed in the article. All in all, given a chance to do the
article again, the issues discussed above would hugely help to make the article better.
